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Okay, so... It seems I need premium membership for critiques, and lets be honest... that'd be a waste of money right there. So here is a very short clip of what I have done with the third episode. So far I have (more or less) finished about 1 minutes worth of animation out of 13. Good times over here.

Things I'm looking for:

Is the widescreen ratio correct? It's currently 800x450px

Does the Doctors about-face seem weird to you?

I added moving necks. Fun times

I may need to redo the run cycle... what do you guys think?



I'm currently on the third scene which in my opinion is the longest and hardest scene in this cartoon since it involves a non-pony character.
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Mood: Joy !sashauna11 Dec 11, 2012
lol
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~DaniFenton12 Nov 24, 2012
It looks good to me. But never ask me for advice for anything. I think everything looks good. I seriously can't wait for this!
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~AwsomeEmKay Oct 21, 2012
I really like the facial expression the Doc had as he fell, have you used that before or is it a new thing?
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~ShebaTheLoneWolf Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
That was pretty good but the running needs work.
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~Ocarinaplaya Oct 11, 2012
Yeah, I'm gonna redo the run cycle...
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~ShebaTheLoneWolf Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Then it should be about perfect :D
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~Ask-Tith Oct 3, 2012
MORE. OMG. MORE.
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Mood: Joy ~darthxrane Sep 28, 2012
The addition of the moving necks really makes this animation stand out. This is looking more and more like the show. (: The only thing I really noticed was, during the Doctor's run, his bulky Earth pony body was replaced by that of famed race horse Usain Colt. =P The Doctor became very lean. And not just his body style, but his out line....lines were suddenly incredibly thin, not matching the rest of his animation. The cycle itself is very good, I just think the body could use a bit bulking up, with thicker lines. c:

But again. This is looking fantastic. The work you put in to this is amazing. :D I feel I must thank you for taking the ungodly amount of time to do this, haha.
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~themagican112233 Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Epic :jawdrop: can't wait for the full version.
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*Edowaado Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You've done brilliant. I really appreciate the amount of work and time you put into this. Thanks a bunch!
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