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Melissa pony conceptby ~Ocarinaplaya

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I need your opinions guys. There's something that doesn't seem right about this design. I think it may be the eye color and hair style. Not sure. At least I got the basic design done and those things are easily corrected.

Post a comment for what you think should change.

Edit 1: made the tail larger/poofier
Edit 2: changed the bangs to be rounder and closer to head

~1Nickzilla1 Jan 29, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

looks like the tail could be a little poofier

~ExMedal Jan 18, 2013 Student

I think its the chin, its to squared

~notalivezombie Jan 17, 2013

Shouldnt the top of her mane be puffy as well, somewhat more like Pinkie Pies?

~Jennjou15 Jan 17, 2013

why dont you make her pelt a bit more closer to a coffee color? and maybe not smiling?

~Ocarinaplaya Jan 18, 2013

I liked using the mauve-on-magenta look when dealing with ponies. It works for Berry Punch. Coffee-on-magenta would be a bit too stark a contrast in my opinion.

~Jennjou15 Jan 18, 2013

good point. but try making her coat a bit more... darker colored. and no smile. that will make her more like...her

~Deftwise-Zero Jan 17, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

In my opinion, the top hair should be flat/not sticking out. like from the angle here [link]

~Ocarinaplaya Jan 18, 2013

I'll give that a shot. Tried not to make it flat since I figured it would look weird.

~IzayaGraeme Jan 17, 2013

Yeah I agree that the forelock being a different style seems odd.

*Mynder Jan 17, 2013 Student Digital Artist

The fact that the forelock of her mane is a completely different style from the rest of her hair might be the problem. Also, if eye color is bugging you, it is usually the same as their CM, so maybe thinking up her talent would help with the eye color thing.

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