I need your opinions guys. There's something that doesn't seem right about this design. I think it may be the eye color and hair style. Not sure. At least I got the basic design done and those things are easily corrected.
Post a comment for what you think should change.
Edit 1: made the tail larger/poofier Edit 2: changed the bangs to be rounder and closer to head
I liked using the mauve-on-magenta look when dealing with ponies. It works for Berry Punch. Coffee-on-magenta would be a bit too stark a contrast in my opinion.
The fact that the forelock of her mane is a completely different style from the rest of her hair might be the problem. Also, if eye color is bugging you, it is usually the same as their CM, so maybe thinking up her talent would help with the eye color thing.